Monday, July 14, 2008

BATTLE OF RHYME 6

what's up people, this is a rap battle against a poet named kevin, check it out

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Carlos "House" Gerardo Vs. Kevin

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mine

i'm looking for a battle of rhyme, but the question is, will u accept, or am i just wasting my time

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kevin

I'll take that challenge,
but lets raise the stakes.
That way when i win
you will know you made a mistake.

Don't worry ill only take what i can give.
How about 10 dollars,
I do not fib.

Because when we are done,
I will win
And it will be me
taking your ten!

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mine

Let me ask, how does one win with a comment that weak, come on man, your rhymes are nothing unique

I’ve seen it all before, a person who thinks he’s a player, but ends up on the floor, when I’m done with u, you won’t be able to take anymore

You see you’re going up against the jackass today, but what u don’t realize, is that I do not play, I rhyme for a living, and blow the competition away

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kevin

Oh yea thats what you think,
I'll be done with you n just one blink.
When it comes to rhyming i cannot lose,
And I make sure i leave my opponent with the bruise.

Your nothing against me,
it may take a while but you will see.
You picked the wrong person to get your fun.
You'll be limping when I'm done.

Yea you heard me i did not stutter.
I'm pulling quick ones that will make you shudder

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mine

Well it’s about time, man I’ve been waiting 20 minutes for u to comeback at my rhyme

Now HA u expect to be done with me in just one blink, but I’ve gone up against better, and the battle lasted a week

You say I’m guan get beat, but confidence is what leads to defeat, cuse when ur up against me, that only turns up the heat

And don’t tell me I’m not even a challenge to u, because by the end of the night, I won’t be the one to lose

I did not pick the wrong person to get my fun, in fact, you’re the perfect one, remember, the battle has only just begun

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kevin

Defeat comes without warning and detection.
Everything i say is sprayed with perfection.

Nothing can stop me from defeating
this battle is nothing,
everything is just repeating.

Try to think of something i haven't heard before.
When you do, don't knock at my door or ill knock you to the floor.

A black eye, broken arm, twisted leg, and you in a hospital bed.
Nothing else is to be said,
or would you rather be dead.

violence in nothing compared to words, words are nothing in the face of me.
Are your ears hurting from the pain of words.
Maybe we should stop a minute before you bleed.

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mine

Well finally u picked up the pace, but to win, u must do more than wave your fist in my face

See, you say your words are sprayed with perfection, your defeat coming without detection, yet I’ve found so many flaws in your game, and for that, perfection, is not to blame

You say this battle is nothing to u, but I know that’s not very true, because already you’ve threatened me like we were in a fight, and to be honest, only cowards turn to that form of might

You’re asking me if I would rather be dead, HA look who’s talking, the boy who has poetic depression written inside of his head (referring to his poetry)

And don’t think I’m scared of what u said before, I fear not of knocking on your door, but I warn, if u even come close to mine, it’ll mean war

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kevin

wow dude that couldn't have been said better,
but if I wasn't in such a state of confusion I might have something to reply to this letter.

Besides whats are you going to do about it. I write about what I feel, im poetically correct and when it comes down to depression or death, its no sweat.
I will win this bet over the net.

I dont need my might to win this fight.
My words are stronger than my arms,
so don't say I'm weak or you will be in harm!

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mine

I never thought I would say it, but u went from bad to worse, do u actually expect to win, with something as bad as that verse, come on man, stop going in reverse

and Don’t tell me to not call u weak, at least not while ur rhymes are so bleak, see, might is exactly what it will take to win this contest, you say your words are stronger than your arms, but that is something I have to protest

ur a good poet, but at the moment, ur coming up with nothing but shit, ur rhymes are out in the cold, and becoming frostbit,

Now here’s your last change to get back in the game, give me a stronger comeback, or just bask in ur shame

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Winner: Carlos "House" Gerardo

Reason: Kevin Backed Down

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